If you've done what I've asked you to do, then you're familiar with Slapz Corner. Besides being a Spartan, Iota, and blogger, Young Slapz is a rapper? Yup and on his blog yesterday he posted this joint featuring Chell called "Cash Out" produced by M.Dizz. It's interesting what 5 minutes and Apple's GarageBand application can do. So Yay or Nay: "Cash Out" - Young Slapz feat. Chell
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nay. think for the future, not for right now kids. "swagger" is hot now but we know fads fad in and out and "swag" is going to come to an end sooner or later just like "fresh" "raw" "tight' etc.
sounds like the typical detroit nigga lol 7mile lol when will niggas from the D learn THAT SHIT AINT HOT! lol big sean got on cuz he sounds nothing like you niggas. he actually has a flow and style. unlike the typical detroit "im from 7mile i got heat " lol NAY!
ey the nigga named "hahahaha" wasnt screamin 7 mile through the whole track like a typical detroit nigga i said what i repped at the end the only thing u heard was 7 mile and detroit, the other things i yelled out u know nothing about, but the only thing u seemed to notice was the ending thanks for sayin i got flow and still but the whole thing at the end wasnt the SONG or the basis of the song!, we never even said we kill, steal, or sell drugs to get our money, this nigga said i cash my check and go spend it, we work for ours cuzzo, so im not the typical detroit nigga dont make me act like one, glad you said nay doe...that'll make the next track go harder this shit was made in 30 minutes....oh aint nobody tryna be like sean that nigga is his own man if i wanted to rap or spit like sean to be hot i would! sean wasnt always nice nigga, in high school my nigga was strait garabage lost rap battles left and right, niggas wasnt bangin his shit, but hatin niggas like you made them flows porgress and come harder it took him his life to get on so dont say this nigga just started spittin and got on, cuz that def wasnt the case the nigga went through hell but that aint me, yes
Andre Harrell: aint nobody thinkin about the future u know why cuz swag hot right NOW and we are in right NOW, it will come to an end sooner or later but thats in the guture right now swag is hot so niggas will feel it, it got a ctachy beat a catchy chorus then we get put on, after we get put in we start producin and creatin more shit that you (the general public) want to hear, u catch me, we got maaaaad traks, i got great metahors and flows but this is the song i wanna put out to get the general public feelin me, u not gon get put on wit no dope ass lyrics and shit the way the game is now, thats why "Getcha Some" is gon be sean first single because its about money, fly shit, and cashing out....then the better shit will be on the album not knockin getcha cuz that shit hot
but thats all i got to say thanks for the criticism, when erebody else is eatin, yall niggas will be commented yay or nay on my multi-platinum album lol thank you...goodbye
man this guy should learn how to take constructive criticism. people are pretty much saying its not your song that not hot, just that be different u can still talk about fly things without using the word swag that everyone else is on right now. u sound like soulja boy u feel me? just change it up..keep doing u
man yall niggas aint sayin shit about my verse fuck the hook, fuck the chorus, fuck all that im talkin about my verse, my flow, my style, yall niggas talkin bout the word swag! the hook! the chorus! me sayin 7 mile! comparing me to sean! all dat shit unecessary nigga!
AINT NOBODY TRYNA BE LIKE ANYBODY IM MY OWN MAN, I PUT THE WORD SWAG IN THERE CUZ I CAN, CUZ IT WENT WELL WIT THE SONG
I CAN TAKE CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM BUT YALL AINT GIVIN IT, I WANT YALL TO TELL ME ERETHING YALL HATE ABOUT MY STYLE, MY FLOW, MY WORDPLAY, THAT TYPE OF SHIT SO I CAN MAKE IT BETTER, NOT ABOUT THE WORD SWAG, NOT ABOUT THE CHICK ON DA HOOK, NOT ABOUT ME REPPIN MY CITY AT THE END OF THE SONG....LIKE COME ON YALL NIGGAS IS SILLY AS FUCK...ID TAKE THE CRITISIM IF YALL WAS DISHIN IT, BUT THIS DUMB BRAUD COMPARIN ME TOO COOKIES AND APPLE JUICE, AND GUESS WHAT WHETHER OR NOT YOU LIKE COOKIES AND APPLE JUICE THAT NIGGA CAM STILL MAKIN MONEY, JUST LIKE IMMA BE DOIN LOL
i mena this like the first track a nigga did, i dont know if yall was expectin sum pac or big or sum shit but im just a nigga tryna further my flow and get on the map.....bitch ass niggas....and i dont sound shiiiiiiiit like soulja boy my nigga, and what about the beat like aint nobody said shit about the beat erebody so on the word "swag" dick that yall aint focused on the song.....
i aint wanna leave the chorus cuz niggas rock wit the chorus and we werent in a studio this is not the complete an final cut version of the song it was recorded on garageband ("It's interesting what 5 minutes and Apple's GarageBand application can do.") did yall read that statement, no yall didnt, a verse made in 5 minutes on garageband...but thanks ash i will be louder when i get to a studio lol
niggas is trying to help u boy the saying come with a better song concept fool! the beat hot you need to be louder but your lyrics and delivery hot! listen to what people is sayin ! they tired of that swag shit ! so give em somethin they wanna hear! not somethin you wanna hear! but its cool! theres some constructive for yo ass! lol
niggas aint sayin be lyrical my guy...niggas is sayin u sound like everybody else right now talkin bout swag..that shit is gettin played...i like the shit just change yo hook..cuz old girl sound straight rat lol
(nigga it was recorded on a macintosh computer this shit aint studio quality)
2."listen to what people is sayin ! they tired of that swag shit ! so give em somethin they wanna hear! not somethin you wanna hear! but its cool! theres some constructive for yo ass! lol"
(nigga cashing out is the concept just cuz the chcik in the back is sayin the word swag does not mean thats the concept of the song u dumb fucks, and dont get smart over the internet cuz they shit wouldnt happen in ma face so *chill*)
3."niggas is sayin u sound like everybody else right now talkin bout swag..that shit is gettin played"
(once again the concept of the song is not swag its cashing out damn a nigga say swag yall go nutz)
"lol at this guy...the section is called yay or nay..and muthfuckas is nay'n right now lol"
(niggas like soulja boy get nay'd all the time by niggas like yall and his money is stacked high as fuck, im in it fa da bread fuck the fame lmao)
nay. think for the future, not for right now kids. "swagger" is hot now but we know fads fad in and out and "swag" is going to come to an end sooner or later just like "fresh" "raw" "tight' etc.
ReplyDeletesounds like the typical detroit nigga lol 7mile lol when will niggas from the D learn THAT SHIT AINT HOT! lol big sean got on cuz he sounds nothing like you niggas. he actually has a flow and style. unlike the typical detroit "im from 7mile i got heat " lol NAY!
ReplyDeleteey the nigga named "hahahaha" wasnt screamin 7 mile through the whole track like a typical detroit nigga i said what i repped at the end the only thing u heard was 7 mile and detroit, the other things i yelled out u know nothing about, but the only thing u seemed to notice was the ending thanks for sayin i got flow and still but the whole thing at the end wasnt the SONG or the basis of the song!, we never even said we kill, steal, or sell drugs to get our money, this nigga said i cash my check and go spend it, we work for ours cuzzo, so im not the typical detroit nigga dont make me act like one, glad you said nay doe...that'll make the next track go harder this shit was made in 30 minutes....oh aint nobody tryna be like sean that nigga is his own man if i wanted to rap or spit like sean to be hot i would! sean wasnt always nice nigga, in high school my nigga was strait garabage lost rap battles left and right, niggas wasnt bangin his shit, but hatin niggas like you made them flows porgress and come harder it took him his life to get on so dont say this nigga just started spittin and got on, cuz that def wasnt the case the nigga went through hell but that aint me, yes
ReplyDeleteAndre Harrell: aint nobody thinkin about the future u know why cuz swag hot right NOW and we are in right NOW, it will come to an end sooner or later but thats in the guture right now swag is hot so niggas will feel it, it got a ctachy beat a catchy chorus then we get put on, after we get put in we start producin and creatin more shit that you (the general public) want to hear, u catch me, we got maaaaad traks, i got great metahors and flows but this is the song i wanna put out to get the general public feelin me, u not gon get put on wit no dope ass lyrics and shit the way the game is now, thats why "Getcha Some" is gon be sean first single because its about money, fly shit, and cashing out....then the better shit will be on the album not knockin getcha cuz that shit hot
but thats all i got to say thanks for the criticism, when erebody else is eatin, yall niggas will be commented yay or nay on my multi-platinum album lol thank you...goodbye
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it sounds alright i guess i cant hear the guy rapping though.
ReplyDeletethe hook sucks besides that i fucks wit it
ReplyDeletewhy is everyb odys song about swag. damn it im tired of hearing that word.
ReplyDeleteyea swag is getting so played out i have to agree. it should end with swag surfin
ReplyDeletewelllllllll i like it but why does the girl on the chorus sound retarded
ReplyDeletelol people are funny. you can rap guy! but the hook is kinda like a whore whos been used to many times. lol
ReplyDeletei would rather listen to cookies n apple juice lol
ReplyDeleteman this guy should learn how to take constructive criticism. people are pretty much saying its not your song that not hot, just that be different u can still talk about fly things without using the word swag that everyone else is on right now. u sound like soulja boy u feel me? just change it up..keep doing u
ReplyDeleteman yall niggas aint sayin shit about my verse fuck the hook, fuck the chorus, fuck all that im talkin about my verse, my flow, my style, yall niggas talkin bout the word swag! the hook! the chorus! me sayin 7 mile! comparing me to sean! all dat shit unecessary nigga!
ReplyDeleteAINT NOBODY TRYNA BE LIKE ANYBODY IM MY OWN MAN, I PUT THE WORD SWAG IN THERE CUZ I CAN, CUZ IT WENT WELL WIT THE SONG
I CAN TAKE CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM BUT YALL AINT GIVIN IT, I WANT YALL TO TELL ME ERETHING YALL HATE ABOUT MY STYLE, MY FLOW, MY WORDPLAY, THAT TYPE OF SHIT SO I CAN MAKE IT BETTER, NOT ABOUT THE WORD SWAG, NOT ABOUT THE CHICK ON DA HOOK, NOT ABOUT ME REPPIN MY CITY AT THE END OF THE SONG....LIKE COME ON YALL NIGGAS IS SILLY AS FUCK...ID TAKE THE CRITISIM IF YALL WAS DISHIN IT, BUT THIS DUMB BRAUD COMPARIN ME TOO COOKIES AND APPLE JUICE, AND GUESS WHAT WHETHER OR NOT YOU LIKE COOKIES AND APPLE JUICE THAT NIGGA CAM STILL MAKIN MONEY, JUST LIKE IMMA BE DOIN LOL
i mena this like the first track a nigga did, i dont know if yall was expectin sum pac or big or sum shit but im just a nigga tryna further my flow and get on the map.....bitch ass niggas....and i dont sound shiiiiiiiit like soulja boy my nigga, and what about the beat like aint nobody said shit about the beat erebody so on the word "swag" dick that yall aint focused on the song.....
thanks to all who are leaving constructive criticism about the flow and style and wordplay though, yall cool wit me, erebody else, suck a dick...
ReplyDeleteyou could have left that horrible chrous out and just had you rapping. u was pretty straight doe for your first time, just be louder next time.
ReplyDeletei aint wanna leave the chorus cuz niggas rock wit the chorus and we werent in a studio this is not the complete an final cut version of the song it was recorded on garageband ("It's interesting what 5 minutes and Apple's GarageBand application can do.") did yall read that statement, no yall didnt, a verse made in 5 minutes on garageband...but thanks ash i will be louder when i get to a studio lol
ReplyDeletehow about the beat my up and coming producer friend marcus aka m.dizz (the first person rapping) made it in like 20 minutes....
ReplyDeleteniggas is trying to help u boy the saying come with a better song concept fool! the beat hot you need to be louder but your lyrics and delivery hot! listen to what people is sayin ! they tired of that swag shit ! so give em somethin they wanna hear! not somethin you wanna hear! but its cool! theres some constructive for yo ass! lol
ReplyDeleteniggas aint sayin be lyrical my guy...niggas is sayin u sound like everybody else right now talkin bout swag..that shit is gettin played...i like the shit just change yo hook..cuz old girl sound straight rat lol
ReplyDeletelol at this guy...the section is called yay or nay..and muthfuckas is nay'n right now lol
ReplyDelete1. "you need to be louder"
ReplyDelete(nigga it was recorded on a macintosh computer this shit aint studio quality)
2."listen to what people is sayin ! they tired of that swag shit ! so give em somethin they wanna hear! not somethin you wanna hear! but its cool! theres some constructive for yo ass! lol"
(nigga cashing out is the concept just cuz the chcik in the back is sayin the word swag does not mean thats the concept of the song u dumb fucks, and dont get smart over the internet cuz they shit wouldnt happen in ma face so *chill*)
3."niggas is sayin u sound like everybody else right now talkin bout swag..that shit is gettin played"
(once again the concept of the song is not swag its cashing out damn a nigga say swag yall go nutz)
"lol at this guy...the section is called yay or nay..and muthfuckas is nay'n right now lol"
(niggas like soulja boy get nay'd all the time by niggas like yall and his money is stacked high as fuck, im in it fa da bread fuck the fame lmao)